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Kota
Konoha Genin
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Age : 29
 |  Subject: Uchiha Rokuro |Jutsu|Edits;;  Fri Jun 18, 2010 2:33 am | |
| Any and all edits I need will be posted here.
Firstly, can you remove the Boku technique in the Senkouken [Kenjutsu] section? I hadn't counted the jutsu points correctly and forgot to leave some room. Also, at the end of Ninjutsu, Katon and Senkouken, put 015|090|100, 040|090|100 and 035|090|100 respectively? Thanks. | |
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Iki
Kumo Genin
Posts : 110
Join date : 2009-10-02
Age : 30
Location : New Hampshire
| | Subject: Re: Uchiha Rokuro |Jutsu|Edits;; Fri Jun 18, 2010 11:21 am | |
| I did the last part, but where the hell is the Boku jutsu??? You mean Botto? | |
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Kota
Konoha Genin
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Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: Uchiha Rokuro |Jutsu|Edits;; Fri Jun 18, 2010 11:49 am | |
| Er, yeah. Sorry. And, where you have the numbers isn't right.. can you put them before the list please? *Will do it for you if you unlock it* | |
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Iki
Kumo Genin
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Location : New Hampshire
| | Subject: Re: Uchiha Rokuro |Jutsu|Edits;; Mon Jun 21, 2010 10:09 am | |
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Kota
Konoha Genin
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha Rokuro |Jutsu|Edits;; Mon Jun 21, 2010 8:02 pm | |
| Hm. Well, because of where it is I can't edit it. Move it back to the main forum for me please? Thanks. | |
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Kota
Konoha Genin
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha Rokuro |Jutsu|Edits;; Thu Jun 24, 2010 3:57 am | |
| All done!
Sorry that it took 2/3 days, I hadn't realized you'd moved it yet. ^^; But, I digress. You can move it back and lock it now if you so wish.
Changes I've made were erasing the Batto jutsu, and adding the JP section at the bottom of the second post. | |
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Iki
Kumo Genin
Posts : 110
Join date : 2009-10-02
Age : 30
Location : New Hampshire
| | Subject: Re: Uchiha Rokuro |Jutsu|Edits;; Thu Jun 24, 2010 10:06 am | |
| Alright approved and moved back, and I wasn't the one who moved the topic in the first place... | |
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Kota
Konoha Genin
Posts : 197
Join date : 2009-09-27
Age : 29
| | Subject: Re: Uchiha Rokuro |Jutsu|Edits;; Thu Jul 01, 2010 2:29 am | |
| Jutsu TopicIf you will, I'd like you to remove the Kekkei Genkai Mastery and replace it with Strength and Power level 2. Thanks. | |
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Soujirou
Suna Tokujō
Posts : 194
Join date : 2009-10-14
| | Subject: Re: Uchiha Rokuro |Jutsu|Edits;; Thu Jul 01, 2010 3:02 am | |
| ... Approved and taken care of... ow head hurts html code owwie | |
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Kota
Konoha Genin
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha Rokuro |Jutsu|Edits;; Tue Jul 13, 2010 2:01 am | |
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Soujirou
Suna Tokujō
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha Rokuro |Jutsu|Edits;; Tue Jul 13, 2010 11:41 am | |
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Kota
Konoha Genin
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha Rokuro |Jutsu|Edits;; Tue Jul 27, 2010 8:28 pm | |
| Adding a few things, since I have a little spare JP. Lol.Batto [Draw]
Type: Taijutsu
Sub-type: Senkouken
Rank: D
Orientation: Defensive
Cost: 4
Effects: The third principle of Senkouken. Act. To know when to fight, how to fight. Not merely reflex but accuracy is what is necessary for a swordsman. Batto focuses on that discipline. By storing chakra into the sheath of a sword via transferring it through the sword in a similar manner to Shunpo. When the Senkou user draws his blade it will be propelled by a sudden push of force from the chakra. With this method, he may cut forward at a strength greater then his other strikes.
Katon Moeagaru Shuriken [Igniting Shurikens]
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Katon
Rank: D
Orientation: Defensive
Cost: 3
Effects: A ranged technique that consists of drawing one's chakra and surrounding it around projectiles. The user will draw fire chakra along the surfaces of the projectiles and then throw them- In mid-air, they will be engulfed by flames, making them even more deadly.
Okibikei [Blazing Fire Wall]
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Katon
Rank: D
Orientation: Supplementary, Offensive
Cost: 4
Effects: A close-range fire technique, the user will release a short wave of flames from their mouth, creating a fiery barrier to burn nearby foes or shield themselves from oncoming attacks. Lasts for only a few seconds.
Also, to keep continuity, please change the Jutsu Points section as follows:015|120|204 Ninjutsu
060|120|204 Katon
045|120|204 Senkouken
Please remember to do the correct coding. Kthnxbai. | |
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Soujirou
Suna Tokujō
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| | Subject: Re: Uchiha Rokuro |Jutsu|Edits;; Tue Jul 27, 2010 10:56 pm | |
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