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Chibi Bob Nukem
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| Here goes. I'd like to add these jutsus to my list. Name: Zecke [Tick] Type: Taijutsu Sub-type: Älter-Ritterlich Kunst Stance: None Rank: E Orientation: Offensive Cost: 1 An offensive skill requiring no stance. It is simply an overhead strike that uses the flat of the blade to deliver blunt damage without the intent of causing death. The purpose of this is to knock someone unconscious or to strike a foe with their back turned. Name: Eisen Pforte [Iron gate] Type: Taijutsu Sub-type: Älter-Ritterlich Kunst Stance: Alber Rank: E Orientation: Defensive Cost: 1 It is known as an Iron Defense for it's versatility for blocking all manner of swords and strikes. One commonly uses the flat of the blade to deflect on coming attacks while using as little movement as possible. Name: Schwerlich Hau [Hardly Strike] Type: Taijutsu Sub-type: Älter-Ritterlich Kunst Stance: None Rank: E Orientation: Defensive Cost: 1 An offensive technique that is known for its speed. It involves a quick and strong horizontal slash that is designed for individual opponents. Name: Ablaufen [Run] Type: Taijutsu Sub-type: Älter-Ritterlich Kunst Stance: None Rank: D Orientation: Offensive Cost: 3 This technique is designed to get around shielded or defensive opponents. Its purpose is to trick them into guarding in a direction, but then attack from the other. It usually consists of a sword strike that goes close, but swings around the foe. Then in a quick movement, the sword changes direction to hit the opponent in their unguarded side. Requires: Speed and Agility Level IName: Ringen Am Schwert [On the Rings Sword] Type: Taijutsu Sub-type: Älter-Ritterlich Kunst Stance: None Rank: (Rank Dependent On Taijutsu Level) Orientation: Offensive Cost: 5 It is a move that combines swordplay with unarmed combat. Taijutsu Master Level - Rank C: Three sword strikes and three unarmed blows may be used. Name: Mord Schlag [Killing blow] Type: Taijutsu Sub-type: Älter-Ritterlich Kunst Stance: Zornhut Rank: C Orientation: Offensive Cost: 5 Its purpose is to use the hilt like a war-hammer to pierce armor and other hard defenses. If one is strong enough, the sword can be used to destroy stone and other hard surfaces. Requires: Broadsword or LongswordRequires: Weapon Specialist Level IIName: Meister Hau, Drei Wunder [Master Strike, Three Wonder] Type: Taijutsu Sub-type: Älter-Ritterlich Kunst Stance: None Rank: B Orientation: Offensive Cost: 9 One of Älter-Ritterlich Kunst's most powerful offensive techniques. It can be used with any stance, and is known for its great destructive power and speed. It is three sword strikes that are swung in an instant that are said to be so fast that it doesn't even look like one sword strike was done. Requires: Weapon Specialist Level IIIJP Used: 195/195 (+20 for missions) Jutsu Count: 17/25 -E(5) -D(5) -C(4) -B(3) Story: 1720 words - Spoiler:
Hideaki walked through the Land of Rain quietly. He was simply enjoying some time off. It wasn't often this boy had some time to himself, and a foreigner originally he didn't have great knowledge of the land. It didn't hurt to spend a bit of one's time to know a bit more about your location. He was just passing by the Mikomi Lake. He looked out onto its waters. It was utterly huge. Hideaki couldn't even see across to the other side. It even intimidated him to walk across its waters. He looked back towards the shores, and saw a man who wore a cloak.
Hideaki approached the man. He held a huge sword in one hand, and wore large plate armor. This was unheard of in the land on nin. Before Hideaki could say anything to the man he began to swing his sword about. Though Hideaki couldn't see what the point was, the man knew what he was doing. In the span of twenty seconds he had performed every stance and every technique Älter-Ritterlich Kunst
had to offer. The water of the lake was blown away for a brief moment by this man's mighty swings.
Hideaki approached the man quickly after this. His breathing was still at idling. This man was at the peak of fitness. It was amazing. He was fixed upon seeing him, but first he had to ask the man.
“Sir, what was that just now,” Hideaki asked.
The man smiled widely, “That was Älter-Ritterlich Kunst young man, would you like to learn it?”
Hideaki beamed at the man's response. He could think of no other way this could have been any easier. He even had to brown nose his Chisokuken sensei while he trained six other pupils. Hideaki nodded rapidly as he found himself at a lack of words. The man laughed at his response.
“Well I need to gauge your skills, we will run!” the man cried.
Hideaki smirked to himself. He was known for his great ability with speed. Running was the simplest thing he knew, and he succeeded at it every time. Just when he thought it was going to be a breeze the man had to add something that knocked Hideaki on his bum.
“AROUND THE LAKE!!!”
Hideaki stared in disbelief as this man said it was fitting to run around the lake. That its beauty could only be truly appreciated if one could see it from all angles. Even Hideaki who could run like no other didn't believe he could run around the whole lake. Before Hideaki could object, the man gestured for him to start running. Hideaki thought for a moment that if he ran as fast as he could that this man would give up on the run, surely he'd be impressed by Hideaki's feat and move on.
Hideaki took off. He was sprinting as fast as he could. He hadn't even added the chakra afterburners yet, and he was making good timing. If he could hold this pace he may make it around the lake in fourty minutes. He turned slowly to see what the man's reaction would be to his speed.
“Oh ho, off to a speedy start,” the man cried out, “I like that!”
Hideaki's face contorted into one of pure shock as he saw the man running at the same speed as him a mere two feet behind him. Not only was this man just as fast as Hideaki, he did this all while wearing his armor. Hideaki turned to face forward slowly with a sickening look on his face. Before he could anything once again to object the man started yelling again.
“I like you kid. I think you are going to be my star pupil. I'm going to make a deal with you. I'll teach you all I know, but you have to master it before night fall. First, our run!” the man cried out, “By the way, my name is Cornelius!”
Hideaki's face remained sickened as he accepted the offer.
1 hour later
Hideaki laid down on the ground breathing haggardly. He was forced to keep that same pace all the way around the lake. He cursed himself for attempting to show off. Cornelius stood next to him staring out at the lake. He had a smile that one would think would be in a statue. It was something to see this man. Hideaki sat up as some of his breath returned to him. Suddenly a giant sword slammed into the ground next to him. It went in about a foot deep just from a single slam. Hideaki jumped to his feet at the sight of the sword.
“Next test, pull out my sword!” Cornelius cried out.
Hideaki sighed quietly as his breath returned to normal for the most part. He walked over to the large sword. It too was unlike anything he'd had seen. It had an edge on both sides, and it's blade was as long as most bo staves. It's hilt had an incredible length as well, but not one unseen in this environment. It glinted lightly despite there being no sunlight visible through the clouds. It was a spectacle of craftsmanship.
Hideaki gripped the blade's handle, and gave it a good yank. It didn't budge an inch. He tried again and again, but to no avail. It must have sank into the deep mud. That meant it was going to be a hassle to just pull out. He pulled with as much strength as he could muster, but it still didn't budge. This time he decided to put some chakra into it. As he pulled he added more and more chakra into his pull. Finally the blade slide out slowly until finally it was cleared of the mud. Despite it being stuck in the ground, not a speck of dirt could be seen on the fine blade. Hideaki dropped the sword immediately after pulling it out only to realize the real reason he couldn't pull it out was due to its sheer weight.
Cornelius caught his blade one handed and swung it over his shoulder. The man laughed loudly with joy at his disciple's victory. Hideaki couldn't believe this man held that sword in such a fashion. He wasn't a statue, but a monster.
“Good show son, I saw you use 'Cat-tra' there. That must mean your one of those ninjer things right,” Cornelius said. Even with his great japanese, his foreigner status was obvious at the mistake of those key words. “That's good, it means that you have something at your disposal I never had. You are the future of this style!”
Hideaki beamed at the man's kind words. He grimaced at his mispronunciations, but ignored them for the most part. Hideaki didn't get much time before Cornelius tossed him a sword. Hideaki caught it with no problem. It was a sword with similar shape and design to Cornelius', however, it was smaller and lighter just for him. Hideaki thought about it a moment, and just as he was about to come to a realization Cornelius interrupted his thoughts.
“You see, I wanted to test your stamina and your strength. That way I could give you the exact sword for you,” Cornelius bellowed, just as Hideaki thought. “Now let us begin!”
6 hours later
Hideaki reflected over his past several hours with Cornelius. He had taught him eight stances. He had been drilled into perfection on the execution of the four offensive stances; Halb Schwert; Zornhut, an advancement of Halb Schwert; Ochse; and Posta Sagittaria. He was relentlessly assaulted until he could defend himself completely with Alber, Krone, and Gewappnet Schützen. He was also forced to attack and defend simultaneously, learning the basics of Meister Hau, with Pflug. These stances are the basics to any master or practitioner of Älter-Ritterlich Kunst. Cornelius had yelled at him many a time when he did a single thing wrong. Somehow he managed to get these right long enough for him to teach him some techniques. Hideaki breezed through the simple ones, but after the first six he ran into trouble. This man was doing things with a broadsword he had never seen done even with a katana. It was remarkable.
There were techniques that attacked blind spots, techniques that tricked the opponent, and techniques that created impervious shields. Hideaki had to watch the technique be done at least a dozen times before he could even begin to recreate it, even then when he attempted to use them Cornelius sent him flying far too many times to count. Even at his least lethal, the man fought like a grizzly bear. Hideaki picked up on something as well. No matter the move he made, Cornelius was one step ahead. Cornelius wouldn't say specifically what this was, but Hideaki had an idea that this was Meister Hau at its best.
After Hideaki finally learned how to use Drei Wunder, Cornelius decided that that was all for today. Hideaki was extremely excited to learn more about Meister Hau, but just as the name translates, only masters can learn it. It was incredible for Hideaki to learn Drei Wunder in one day, but for him to become a master he needed to use the style for a considerable amount of time.
With the rest of their time, Cornelius and Hideaki talked. Mostly about Cornelius' past in the far east. He described things Hideaki couldn't image, wars that couldn't be explained, and sports that didn't make sense. All in all, it was a land different in all ways from his own, but if there was one similarity it was the people. Cornelius said that no matter where you go in the world there is still kindness. It was a remarkable thing, at least from what Cornelius says.
Hideaki hefted his new longsword over his back. This definitely wasn't how he planned to use his off day, but it was well worth it. Just wait until the other shinobi hear about him learning all of this. He also had a bunch of money he planned to spend on that really nice wakizashi. Cornelius has longswords out the wazzo, but not rapiers. Hideaki didn't mind anyway, he'd be happier with a traditional sword along with his new sword.
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Älter-Ritterlich Kunst (Old Knightly Ways)
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[b]Name:[/b] Zecke [Tick]
[b]Type:[/b] Taijutsu
[b]Sub-type:[/b] Älter-Ritterlich Kunst
[b]Stance:[/b] None
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Orientation:[/b] Offensive
[b]Cost:[/b]
An offensive skill requiring no stance. It is simply an overhead strike that uses the flat of the blade to deliver blunt damage without the intent of causing death. The purpose of this is to knock someone unconscious or to strike a foe with their back turned.
[b]Name:[/b] Eisen Pforte [Iron gate]
[b]Type:[/b] Taijutsu
[b]Sub-type:[/b] Älter-Ritterlich Kunst
[b]Stance:[/b] Alber
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Orientation:[/b] Defensive
[b]Cost:[/b]
It is known as an Iron Defense for it's versatility for blocking all manner of swords and strikes. One commonly uses the flat of the blade to deflect on coming attacks while using as little movement as possible.
[b]Name:[/b] Schwerlich Hau [Hardly Strike]
[b]Type:[/b] Taijutsu
[b]Sub-type:[/b] Älter-Ritterlich Kunst
[b]Stance:[/b] None
[b]Rank:[/b] E
[b]Orientation:[/b] Defensive
[b]Cost:[/b]
An offensive technique that is known for its speed. It involves a quick and strong horizontal slash that is designed for individual opponents.
[b]Name:[/b] Ablaufen [Run]
[b]Type:[/b] Taijutsu
[b]Sub-type:[/b] Älter-Ritterlich Kunst
[b]Stance:[/b] None
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Orientation:[/b] Offensive
[b]Cost:[/b]
This technique is designed to get around shielded or defensive opponents. Its purpose is to trick them into guarding in a direction, but then attack from the other. It usually consists of a sword strike that goes close, but swings around the foe. Then in a quick movement, the sword changes direction to hit the opponent in their unguarded side.
[b]Requires: Speed and Agility Level I[/b]
[b]Name:[/b] Ringen Am Schwert [On the Rings Sword]
[b]Type:[/b] Taijutsu
[b]Sub-type:[/b] Älter-Ritterlich Kunst
[b]Stance:[/b] None
[b]Rank:[/b] (Rank Dependent On Taijutsu Level)
[b]Orientation:[/b] Offensive
[b]Cost:[/b]
It is a move that combines swordplay with unarmed combat.
Taijutsu Master Level - Rank C: Three sword strikes and three unarmed blows may be used.
[b]Name:[/b] Mord Schlag [Killing blow]
[b]Type:[/b] Taijutsu
[b]Sub-type:[/b] Älter-Ritterlich Kunst
[b]Stance:[/b] Zornhut
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Orientation:[/b] Offensive
[b]Cost:[/b]
Its purpose is to use the hilt like a war-hammer to pierce armor and other hard defenses. If one is strong enough, the sword can be used to destroy stone and other hard surfaces.
[b]Requires: Broadsword or Longsword[/b]
[b]Requires: Weapon Specialist Level II[/b]
[b]Name:[/b] Meister Hau, Drei Wunder [Master Strike, Three Wonder]
[b]Type:[/b] Taijutsu
[b]Sub-type:[/b] Älter-Ritterlich Kunst
[b]Stance:[/b] None
[b]Rank:[/b] B
[b]Orientation:[/b] Offensive
[b]Cost: [/b]
One of Älter-Ritterlich Kunst's most powerful offensive techniques. It can be used with any stance, and is known for its great destructive power and speed. It is three sword strikes that are swung in an instant that are said to be so fast that it doesn't even look like one sword strike was done.
[b]Requires: Weapon Specialist Level III[/b]
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| | | | Chibi Bob Nukem
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| I would like to add these jutsu under Älter-Ritterlich Kunst please. I'm using the 40 jp I got from these two missions last Saturday. https://joukaiden.rpg-board.net/completed-mission-evaluations-f117/c-rank-missions-t522.htmhttps://joukaiden.rpg-board.net/taijutsu-styles-ninpos-f38/alter-ritterlich-kunst-old-knightly-ways-kenjutsu-style-t345.htmName: Rauschen [Murmur] Type: Taijutsu Sub-type: Älter-Ritterlich Kunst Stance: Krone Rank: D Orientation: Defensive Cost: 2 A defensive technique that uses the sharp of the blade to deflect attacks. It is the opposite of Porto di Ferro Mezzena. It uses large and quick arm movements to deflect many attacks using the sharp of the blade. Requires: Weapon Specialist Level IIName: Passos Straordinario [Extraordinary Step] Type: Taijutsu Sub-type: Älter-Ritterlich Kunst Stance: Posta Sagittaria Rank: C Orientation: Offensive Cost: 5 It is a stabbing attacking that's power is fueled by the user's speed and striking strength. The sword impales the target almost entirely to the hilt. Then the sword is pulled out as quickly as possible with a slight angle added. Requires: Speed and Agility Level IIIf using Broadsword or Longsword, Requires: Weapon Specialist III and Strength and Power Level IName: Porto di Ferro Mezzena [Iron Gate Half] Type: Taijutsu Sub-type: Älter-Ritterlich Kunst Stance: Posta Sagittaria Rank: C Orientation: Defensive Cost: 5 A defensive technique that uses the flat of the blade to deflect attacks. This technique is meant for deflecting many on coming attacks without moving very much. Requires: Weapon Specialist Level IIHere is the story that goes with these. It's 2648 words. I had a good time writing this one. - Spoiler:
Hideaki wandered blindly through the forest. The trees surrounding him. The light rain made loud noises like drums here in the forest. He pushed branches and large leaves out of the way as he searched intently. He knew it was here somewhere in the Shikeru Forest. He just had to find it.
He had received a note stuck to his door this morning via a small dagger. It read in traditional japanese with several english and italian words on it. Hideaki could tell who it was from just by some of the non-japanese that was written on it. This note was left by his sensei, Cornelius. It read that Cornelius had heard that Hideaki was using a wakizashi now. Cornelius said he had a few things he could teach Hideaki with that blade, but he had to find him. He was staying in the ruins of the Daimyo's castle deep in the Shikeru Forest. If Hideaki doesn't make it by nightfall he wouldn't train him.
That was why Hideaki was treking the thick forest for a sign of the Daimyo's castle. One would think that a structure like that wouldn't be too difficult to find, but it was. The forest had over grown in the time that the Daimyo abandoned his former home. It had consumed all within, and made its domain its own once again. The castle was a landmark within the forest, but one had to be very deep to even see the once great structure.
Hideaki tried to see the sky from within the trees. He took a drop of water directly in the eye. He winced and rubbed his eye from the drop. It was foolish of him to even try to look up. He knew this was a rain forest so there'd be little chance he'd be able to see through the tree top canopy. Even if he had somehow seen through the leaves there was no way of knowing the time just by looking at the clouds. The clouds never changed unless it was dawn or dusk. Hideaki knew that he'd left late morning so it had to be early afternoon by now. He didn't have much time left.
Using the skills that allowed him to use the style Älter-Ritterlich Kunst in the first place, Hideaki leaped upwards. He bounced from to tree to tree and branch to branch until he broke through the canopy. The rain fell much harder here in the forest. Changing from the light rain to a light downpour. He couldn't run on top of the tree tops due to the moisture on the leaves. He would slip and fall in a moment. The only good it did him to get this high up was to see if he could see the castle yet.
The forest was thick and large. Just as the lake and swamps, the forest was much larger than the eye could see. It easily moved past the horizon. Hideaki had made his way to the top of the canopy a few times now, but was disappointed to find that the castle was out of sight. He began to worry that he himself was now lost. Surely he'd be able to make his way out of the forest if he tried his best. This time however, the fourth time, was his lucky time. The castle was straight ahead of him, like an arrow.
Hideaki dropped to the forest floor, and quickly made a beeline straight ahead. He ran for several seconds only to begin to doubt that he was close to it. In his haste, Hideaki made his way back above the tree tops. He scanned the area around him only to realize that the castle was now to his right, maybe fifty yards away. Once again he dropped to the floor, and ran straight towards the castle. Same as his previous attempt he felt that he had missed it once again.
Hideaki looked out from under a leaf to see that the castle was behind him. The opposite direction that he was running. There was no way that he could have passsed through it, but moving around it was unlikely. He thought about it for a few moments before letting himself fall to the floor once again. This time he moved slower. He made sure that he was going straight. If a tree blocked his path, he moved around it, but didn't move forwards until he was sure that he was moving straight ahead again.
He made a final push through the brush to fall into a sort of clearing. The castle was before him. It was covered in plants and vines, but the grounds remained treeless. It made some sense, not that much time had passed since the castle was abandoned and trees wouldn't be fully grown in that amount of time. Hideaki marveled at the structure and nature's twist it had added to it for a few more moments before a familiar voice called out.
“Oi! What are you doing over yander~!”
Cornelius was perched atop a large stone block that had fallen from one of the castles walls. It was much larger than he was, yet after what Hideaki had seen the man do it seemed so small. Hideaki walked over to his sensei as the man beamed at his star pupil. The two had more of a friendly relationship than that of master and student, but it didn't matter. This was just the way their personalities worked.
“So I heard you got a new sword,” Cornelius called, “Please, unsheathe it.”
Hideaki moved his right hand behind him. He gripped the long handle of his wakizashi that rested on his lower back. It sat horizontally on his body instead of vertically like most weapons. His fuuma shurikens clicked lightly as they moved from his body movements. He pulled on his blade, and it slid out effortlessly. The blade was jagged and chipped, but it was solid. This blade had seen much abuse, and never cracked or broke. Hideaki chose it because of its record. He'd rather trust his life in a sword that has survived many battles without breaking than to a new blade that had no experience.
Cornelius' eyes widened as he saw the blade, “Wave Serpent?”
Hideaki shot a puzzled look at his sensei, “What do you mean, Cornelius-sensei?”
He had a lost expression on his face for a few moments before returning to life, “Excuse me, that blade reminded me of a good friend of mine.”
Cornelius leaped down off of his rock to land before Hideaki. He eyeballed the blade for a few moments before straightening himself back up.
“May I?” he asked.
Hideaki smiled as he handed his sensei that blade. Cornelius walked over to the edge of the woods. The man had experience with weapons. Just by wielding them he could feel their emotions. He could see what they had been through. It was something that seemed farfetched, but Hideaki didn't doubt the man for a second. The knight, who happened to not be wearing his armor today, but actually traveling robes similar to a monks, made several strikes on the bamboo and foliage. He scanned his work before beckoning Hideaki over.
“You see this,” Cornelius asked while pointing at his cuts, “the patterns in the cuts. This is what happens when you swing a dull blade.”
Hideaki felt his stomach sink. He knew his master was dissatisfied with his choice of blade. That was the only explanation for this sudden caring for detail. Hideaki turned his gaze away as he felt shame befall him. Cornelius quickly picked up on this.
“My good friend fought with a blade similar to this one,” Hideaki turned his head quickly, clearly surprised, “He was known as the Wave Serpent. He would use a rapier that was so dull that most couldn't cut vegetables with it. He, however, would turn this dull weapon into a more deadly one that anyone could imagine. He could cut anything with his blade, but unlike most weapons, his cuts were precise but dirty. The rough blade would leave jagged rips and tears inside.”
Hideaki stared in disbelief at the blade. It had a strange hilt on it. It had cogs and bars on it that made it impossible to fit correctly in most sheaths, but it did seem solid. Hideaki had heard the stories the owner of the shop had told him about the blade. Hideaki did manage to get a discount due to the condition of the blade, but he felt that the blade was worth full price.
Cornelius thumbed the blade, “This sword has been through a lot. It had a careless master who slaughtered many without caring for his blade afterward. He often would resheath it with blood on the blade, and would never sharpen it. Yet, the sword was downhearted when his master threw him aside. He wanted to prove his worth. That's why he never broke. This sword knows it can take any form of abuse. Now, it's ready to prove itself to its new owner.”
Cornelius returned the blade to Hideaki. He felt like he was walking on air. This blade reminded him of himself. A sword with history. It was amazing. Hideaki was surprised that the sword even chose him. Maybe it actually chose Cornelius-sensei, but decided that it would assist him. Hideaki held the blade in his hands. He promised to never let it down.
Cornelius moved away as Hideaki connected with the sword. He had a large smile on his face. His star pupil never ceased to amaze him. It was this reason that he had remained in the Land of Rain. He had only come to this country to see the large lake, but little did he know that this trip would bring him his greatest disciple. It was fate.
Cornelius picked up his massive great sword with one arm. He hefted it over his shoulder as he approached the large block he sat upon. With a flick of his wrist, the might sword flew end over end in the air. Cornelius reached out, and grabbed it by the blade. He pulled his arms back, similar to how one would wield a warhammer, and slammed the hilt down onto the block. Instantly the block shattered into many many pieces. The great sword remained unscratched in its master's hands.
Hideaki straigthened up this time. Brought back to earth by the sound of stone shattering. He was aware of this technique. That was Mord Schlag. A deadly technique. Hideaki gripped his wakizashi in his right hand. He could feel the red cloth on his hand. He could feel the blade just itching to prove itself, and Hideaki felt the same for the blade.
Cornelius stabbed his great sword back into the ground, and picked up a few rocks. “Hideaki! I'm going to be teaching a few techniques today. Most of them defensive. You will learn quickly. Deflect these rocks!”
Hideaki stared for a moment as he saw his master begin to chuck rocks at him. The first rock flew so fast that he instinctively sidestepped it. The next few rocks were lined up so that they would his him if he sidestepped again. He had to get accustom to the rocks speeds to effectively block them. He quickly whipped his arm. The blade connected with the rock. In a moment sparks flew. The rock was sent flying away. At least a dozen more rocks met a similar fate.
Hideaki watched intently. He could tell that his master was throwing the rocks more and more frequently now. The time in between the rocks shrank from a second to mere milliseconds. He continued to whip his arm around. The blade's sharp easily deflected the rocks without any damage to the blade. He even found that some rocks would be sliced in half, hardly able to stand up to the sword.
Just as suddenly as it had started, it stopped. “Great job Hideaki, I knew you'd do that,” Cornelius cried out, “That move is Rauschen. It is utilized large arm movements to deflect objects. However, this move is weak against larger objects. That's why you are going to learn to block these next rocks with the flat of your blade.”
Hideaki stood ready. He knew that his sensei wasn't about to let him catch his breath before he flung much larger pieces of rock his way. This time he focused on keeping the blade's flat pointed outwards. The first rock nearly caused him to drop his blade. The second rock ricocheted off of the blade off in some random direction. By the third rock though, Hideaki realized what this technique did. He used the flat of the blade to reflect the rocks, but he directed it so that they'd bounce off without loosing much energy. He also realized how much easier it was to block multiple attacks this way, but it also tested his arm strength. He thought that whipping your arm around would be more energy consuming, but apparently this required much more muscle than he suspected.
Cornelius clapped his hands, “Another good show Hideaki, That is the first step to mastering your next stance. Posta Sagittaria,” Cornelius pulled a rapier out from a sheathe on his right thigh. He lowered his center of gravity, and placed two fingers on his blade. Hideaki held his blade to his side, ready to defend this man attack in some way. However, no defense was fast enough.
Cornelius was upon Hideaki in a second, the rapier pointed directly as his chest. Hideaki barely manage to block the rapier with his own blade, but it threatened to break loose. Just as he thought he'd be pierced, Cornelius back off. He was in the same stance once again. A second of silence went by before the man moved again. This time Hideaki performed a similar stance. He too placed two of his fingers on the blade. He felt it, the change in the air as Cornelius charged. It was a beeline movement, easy to follow.
Hideaki moved to his left, and used his blade to deflect his sensei's rapier. Just as Cornelius leaped back, Hideaki released his own speed. Keeping two fingers on the blade, Hideaki charged Cornelius. He thrust his blade, directly at his sensei's chest. He blocked the blade with his rapier, stopping the tip with the flat of his blade. Hideaki instinctively pulled down on his blade, causing it to scrap against his sensei's rapier. He breathed heavily for a moment before meeting eyes with his master.
“That is Passos Straordinario, or Extraordinary Step. That defensive technique you used was Porto di Ferro Mezzena, Iron Half Gate. These are the fundimental techniques of Posta Sagittaria. You use your thin blade like an arrow. The blade acts as the arrowhead while you propel it with yourself. In a sense, you become the arrow.” Cornelius looked upwards at the grey sky “That's why I had you come here. You had to realize what its like to be an arrow by making a straight path through the forest.”
Hideaki stared dumbfounded that his sensei had come up with this whole training procedure, “Why do I have to make it before nightfall though?”
Cornelius' smile returned, “Because I don't like the dark.”
Hideaki once again questioned whether his master was a philosopher or a fool. He knew the real answer of course. Cornelius had traveled the world. He was a scholar as well as a fighter. He had great knowledge, and great skill. He is a genius of sorts. Hideaki respected that, and revered it. He wished to become much like Cornelius-sensei.
“Ah so Hideaki,” Cornelius began, “Do you happen to know the way out?”
Hideaki's jaw dropped at his sensei's question. Scratch that, he is a fool.
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[b]Name:[/b] Rauschen [Murmur]
[b]Type:[/b] Taijutsu
[b]Sub-type:[/b] Älter-Ritterlich Kunst
[b]Stance:[/b] Krone
[b]Rank:[/b] D
[b]Orientation:[/b] Defensive
[b]Cost:[/b] 2
A defensive technique that uses the sharp of the blade to deflect attacks. It is the opposite of Porto di Ferro Mezzena. It uses large and quick arm movements to deflect many attacks using the sharp of the blade.
[b]Requires: Weapon Specialist Level II[/b]
[b]Name:[/b] Passos Straordinario [Extraordinary Step]
[b]Type:[/b] Taijutsu
[b]Sub-type:[/b] Älter-Ritterlich Kunst
[b]Stance:[/b] Posta Sagittaria
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Orientation:[/b] Offensive
[b]Cost:[/b] 5
It is a stabbing attacking that's power is fueled by the user's speed and striking strength. The sword impales the target almost entirely to the hilt. Then the sword is pulled out as quickly as possible with a slight angle added.
[b]Requires: Speed and Agility Level II[/b]
[b]If using Broadsword or Longsword, Requires: Weapon Specialist III and Strength and Power Level I[/b]
[b]Name:[/b] Porto di Ferro Mezzena [Iron Gate Half]
[b]Type:[/b] Taijutsu
[b]Sub-type:[/b] Älter-Ritterlich Kunst
[b]Stance:[/b] Posta Sagittaria
[b]Rank:[/b] C
[b]Orientation:[/b] Defensive
[b]Cost:[/b] 5
A defensive technique that uses the flat of the blade to deflect attacks. This technique is meant for deflecting many on coming attacks without moving very much.
[b]Requires: Weapon Specialist Level II[/b]
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| | Subject: Re: Hideaki Aoba's Jutsu Update Wed Jun 30, 2010 10:25 am | |
| If these are from an approved Style of Kenjutsu then you don't need the rp for it, Just for future reference. Oh and you forgot your costs
Ps. please put the link to your approved jutsu topic next time you want an edit done. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Hideaki Aoba's Jutsu Update Wed Jun 30, 2010 10:44 am | |
| Ah the meanies in the cb told me I needed to rp for them. Costs added. Will do, forgot about that. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Hideaki Aoba's Jutsu Update Wed Jun 30, 2010 3:39 pm | |
| Ahem if you are going to Code up something then you should make sure the costs are in the code as well, after that I will approve them okay | |
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| | Subject: Re: Hideaki Aoba's Jutsu Update Wed Jun 30, 2010 7:15 pm | |
| lol picky picky, I try to be a little bit helpful Edited. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Hideaki Aoba's Jutsu Update Sat Jul 24, 2010 7:10 pm | |
| Plus 30 JP B-rank MissionJutsu Points 60/60 Bonus Jutsu Points 65/65 Extra Jutsu Points 60/180 Total Jutsu Points 185/305 | |
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| Plus 40 JP C-rank MissionsJutsu Points 175/205
Bonus Jutsu Points 90/90
Extra Jutsu Points 115/268
Total Jutsu Points 365/553 | |
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| | Subject: Re: Hideaki Aoba's Jutsu Update Tue Aug 17, 2010 3:20 pm | |
| Due to some story elements that will probably require me to fight, and that it's taking forever for anyone to look at the two styles I want in request, I'll have to make one of my styles Chisokuken for now. Name: Kitai [Anticipation] Type: Taijutsu Sub-type: Chisokuken Rank: D Orientation: Defensive Cost: 2 Effects: The user will focus on an opponent, watching closely for any movements. Their bodies reactions will increase as long as they remain motionless, allowing them to respond quicker to attacks. This cannot be used to make attacks faster, though this move may aid in finding an opening. This jutsu cannot be used immediately, and must be used one turn before gaining the benefits. Requires Level I Speed and Agility. Name: Taren-Ken [Multi-Punch)] Type: Taijutsu Sub-type: Chisokuken Rank: D Orientation: Offensive Cost: 3 Effects: The ninja will release a barrage of fist blow, seeking not to strike as hard as possible but rather as much as possible, each strike weak on its own but together a powerful flurry. Name: Taren-Kikku [Multi-Kick] Type: Taijutsu Sub-type: Chisokuken Rank: D Orientation: Offensive Cost: 3 Effects: The ninja will release a barrage of kicks, seeking not to strike as hard as possible but rather as much as possible, each strike weak on its own but together a powerful flurry. Name: Tadayō [Drift] Type: Taijutsu Sub-type: Defensive Rank: C Orientation: Defensive Cost: 5 Effects: The Shinobi, like with Kūtenryu, will draw chakra into their legs. This time, however, it will be released in short controlled bursts, enhancing their speed in order to weave back, forward, and side-to-side. This will allow the ninja to make their way through groups of foes, dodge as barrage of projectiles, and defend against simultaneous attacks. May be maintained for two chakra instead of one per turn. Requires Level III Speed and Agility. Name: Kiwamaruiki [Extreme Acceleration] Type: Taijutsu Sub-type: Chisokuken Rank: B Orientation: Supplementary Cost: 8 Effects: This taijutsu breaks the limits of the user's speed, enhancing their reflexes and mobility to extremes. This high increase in their agility will allow them not only to run fast but beyond the point where normal perception may keep up with them, allowing the user to essentially surround the enemy, moving from place to place in a blink of an eye striking from any point. However, as grand as this technique is, it is also extremely tiring, requiring a three chakra maintaining cost instead of one point. Requires Level III Speed and Agility. Name: Zanzō [Afterimage] Type: Taijutsu Sub-type: Chisokuken Rank: B Orientation: Supplementary Cost: 8 Effects: A taijutsu that allows one to produce a "Copy" which mimics the user's movements, created by the speed that allows one to move their body at such a rate in which it seems like they are in two places. This image will be manipulated in accordance with the original's movements. Thus, moving to point A and then to B, their will appear to two ninjas at both points. And because the user moves at such a speed that it is difficult to observe, foes will be unable to easily tell the real one. The afterimage will be destroyed if touched, but will regenerate moments later. This jutsu must be utilized with either Kiwamaruiki, Tadayō, or similar jutsus. This technique does not require a maintaining cost. This technique ends when the jutsu required for it does. Requires Level III Speed and Agility. Hideaki's Approved Jutsu148JP - 85 = 63JP available | |
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| | Subject: Re: Hideaki Aoba's Jutsu Update Tue Aug 17, 2010 11:31 pm | |
| M'kay approved I will add it later | |
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| | Subject: Re: Hideaki Aoba's Jutsu Update Tue Aug 24, 2010 7:30 pm | |
| Name: Kinton: Hagane Byakuren [Metal Release: Metal White Lotus ]Type: Ninjutsu Sub-type: Kinton Rank: B Orientation: Offensive Cost: 10 + 4 for each additional clone Effects: This jutsu allows Hideaki to cause his Kinton Bunshins to burst into a white lotus. The petals and tendrils of the lotus are as sharp as any sword and will impale anything near them. The petals swing out in a circular motion, and are more than capable of slicing through flesh with ease. If the clone is within five feet of another Kinton Bunshin and the chakra is payed, the additional clone may be affected as well. Manipulation of MetalName: Suiton: Hahonryū [Water Release: Tearing Torrent ]Type: Ninjutsu Sub-type: Suiton Rank: C Orientation: Offensive Cost: 6 Effects: The user focuses chakra into their palm and makes water. They then make the water spin rapidly similar to a compact whirlpool. The water can be used point blank to inflict blunt damage or released outwards to make a ranged attack that is similar to getting hit with a firehose. This jutsu also creates enough water to fill a pond. The Roars Of Rushing WaterTwo custom jutsu I'd like to get approved. 83 - 35 = 48JP Available. | |
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| | Subject: Re: Hideaki Aoba's Jutsu Update Sat Aug 28, 2010 7:40 pm | |
| Name: Dōbutsu Bunshin no Jutsu[Animal Clone Technique]
Type: Genjutsu
Sub-type: Sight
Rank: D
Orientation: Supplementary
Cost: 4
Effects: An alteration of the Bunshin technique. The user is able to create an illusionary clone of an animal companion or a summon, although the clone disperses into smoke once hit with some kind of physical force like with the original Bunshin technique.
Name: Kasumi Jūsha no Jutsu [Mist Servant Technique]
Type: Genjutsu
Sub-type: Sight
Rank: C
Orientation: Supplementary
Cost: 5
Effects: Essentially a more advance version of the Bunshin technique, this technique produces twenty images of a person. Unlike the normal Bushin, these clones will reform if damaged as if made of a gooey substance. These clones however cannot cause any physical damage, they are still illusions.
Name: Kagai Bunshin no Jutsu [Mirror Clone Technique ]
Type: Genjutsu
Sub-type: Sight + Feel
Rank: C
Orientation: Supplementary
Cost: 7
Effects: An alteration of the Bunshin technique, creating a Bunshin of the enemy that appears to actually be able to fight. In reality the target fighting nothing but in the target’s mind he really is fighting a copy of himself and the copy will not go away until he figures out how to destroy it, or dispels the genjutsu. This is good for exhausting their target and possibly making their target expose their weaknesses in order to destroy the copy.
Name: Higai Mōsō no Jutsu [Paranoia Technique]
Type: Genjutsu
Sub-type: Feel
Rank: B
Orientation: Supplementary
Cost: 10
Effects: An illusion which makes people become skeptical to their teammates for they think they are going to betray them. This causes them to fight amongst each other making them easy targets. This can target up to four people at once.
I'd like to remove these jutsu to get some JP back, 48 + 60 = 108JP | |
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| | Subject: Re: Hideaki Aoba's Jutsu Update Sun Jan 30, 2011 3:41 pm | |
|  I'm tired of bull malarkey so I'm completely dumping anything that I got from the advice of a certain formerly orange man so I'm removing my Master Summoning and replacing it with Master Sealing. It'll be an even trade. I'll be removing my summons from all of my records and the summoning jutsu. I'll add some sealing jutsu later. +15 JP removal of Summoning Jutsu Adding Juin Jutsu - Spoiler:
Name: Juin Jutsu [Cursed Seal Technique]
Type: Ninpō
Sub-type: Fūin
Rank: A
Orientation:: Supplementary
Cost:
Effects:This technique is used by certain Ninjas to place special seals which grant ninjas power, usually at a price. Curse Seals are utilized at a last desperate and resort, and usually have 2 Levels. The Seal is placed upon the user's body(Neck is the most common) and when activated, it change the marking in someway, markings appearing over the body is usually common. The seal can become addictive, and is both chakra consumer and dangerous to use. The seal can be activated manually, if the user has enough control, or can be activated unwillingly during a life threatening situation. Many Seals have also been altered to cause the host to become loyal to the sealer in some way or fashion, and can have other functions as well. The user can have up to 1-3 placed Curse Seals at once, depending on the sealer's Seal Knowledge Level, and will continue to function until the sealer is dead. Requires Seal Knowledge Lv.3
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| | Subject: Re: Hideaki Aoba's Jutsu Update Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:19 pm | |
| Ok with the approval of my style I'm adding some jutsu. I also relooked at all of my jutsu and all of the missions I've done plus what I've given away. I have some updated values plus some jutsu deductions I'd like to do. Once I finish I will post a summary of everything I've done. Jutsu to Remove: - Spoiler:
Name: Suirou no Jutsu [Water Prison Technique]
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Suiton
Rank: C
Orientation: Offensive
Cost: 6
Effects: Trapping enemies within an orb of water, the Water Prision Technique is a useful move which when performed correctly can take an opponent out of the battlefield. An enemy will first move close to an enemy before summoning water which will surround an opponent, a sphere of liquid surrounding them before solidifying. This hardened ball will trap a foe within and prevent them from escaping. Because of it's small confines and lack of air within, breaking free is a difficult venture, with only more dramatic methods capable of working. The Suirou jutsu requires the user to maintain contact with the sphere of water, or it will break apart and free the user within.
Name: Daibakufu no Jutsu [Grand Waterfall Technique]
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-type: Suiton
Rank: A
Orientation: Offensive
Cost: 12
Effects: A suiton technique that is particularly drastic, using a large amount of water and causing it to swirl beneath an opponent, forming a vortex. This whirlpool will begin to draw everything, foe and ally alike into it's grasp before at last erupting in a great thrashing wave, taking anything caught within it's grasp and throwing them across the battleground without any mercy. Difficult to escape and exhausting to survive if caught by it.
Name: Zanzō [Afterimage]
Type: Taijutsu
Sub-type: Chisokuken
Rank: B
Orientation: Supplementary
Cost: 8
Effects:A taijutsu that allows one to produce a "Copy" which mimics the user's movements, created by the speed that allows one to move their body at such a rate in which it seems like they are in two places. This image will be manipulated in accordance with the original's movements. Thus, moving to point A and then to B, their will appear to two ninjas at both points. And because the user moves at such a speed that it is difficult to observe, foes will be unable to easily tell the real one. The afterimage will be destroyed if touched, but will regenerate moments later. This jutsu must be utilized with either Kiwamaruiki, Tadayō, or similar jutsus. This technique does not require a maintaining cost. This technique ends when the jutsu required for it does. Requires Level III Speed and Agility.
Name: Nehan Shōja no Jutsu [Temple of Nirvana]
Type: Genjutsu
Sub-type: Feel + Sight
Rank: A
Orientation: Supplementary
Cost: 12
Effects: An illusion which makes white feathers fall from the sky that lull all those that are near to sleep.
+85 JP
Jutsu to Add: - Spoiler:
Name: Zanganken [Stone Splitting Blade]
Type: Taijutsu
Sub-type: Kenjutsu
Rank: D
Cost: 2
Effects: The user coats the blade of their sword with chakra that increases the cutting potential of their sword. The user can cut through stone like simple foliage.
Name: Ishigakishisu [Stone Wall Sheath]
Type: Taijutsu
Sub-type: Kenjutsu
Rank: D
Cost: 2
Effects: The user coats their sheath with chakra increasing its durability. The sheath can be used as a striking weapon or a defensive weapon without worry of the sheath breaking.
Name: Zankuusan [Air Cleaving Flash]
Type: Taijutsu
Sub-type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Cost: 5
Effects: The user coats their blade in chakra. When the sword is swung the chakra leaves the blade in the form of a crescent shaped shock wave. The shock wave can create a two inch deep cut on most surfaces it impacts on including flesh.
Name: Ourougekka [Gazing Moon Petal]
Type: Taijutsu
Sub-type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Cost: 5
Effects: This is one of the few unarmed techniques used by Shinmeiryuu swordsmen. The user coats their palm with chakra. They can strike the opponent with it to increase the force of their blow by two fold.
Name: Mugen no Yaibi [Blade of Infinity]
Type: Taijutsu
Sub-type: Kenjutsu
Rank: C
Cost: 6
Effects: The user coats their blade with chakra. The chakra distorts the blade's image when swung. Several afterimages of the sword appear during the swing making the location of the original sword nearly impossible to pinpoint.
Name: Hyakuretsu Oukazen [Hundred Raging Cherry Blossoms Slash]
Type: Taijutsu
Sub-type: Kenjutsu
Rank: B
Cost: 8
Effects: The user coats their blade and arm with chakra. The user slashes in all directions in a sweeping motion. The chakra creates a tornado in appearance that bursts into cherry blossoms when the user finishes their attack.
Name: Tsukimi no Yozakura [Evening Cherry Blossoms]
Type: Taijutsu
Sub-type: Kenjutsu
Rank: B
Cost: 8
Effects: The user coats their blade and arm with chakra. The user makes a circular slash which makes a large tower of cherry blossoms. The user moves quickly between the cherry blossoms around their target while making slashes at every pass. The cherry blossoms disguise the user's movements. When the user completes the jutsu the cherry blossoms blow away in the wind.
Name: Kyokudai Raimeiken [Greatest Crying Thunder Sword]
Type: Taijutsu
Sub-type: Kenjutsu
Rank: A
Cost: 12
Effects: The user charges chakra into their blade and strikes toward their target. When they near the target the chakra is released in a large explosive shock wave. The strike is more than capable of breaking steel. The shock wave creates a large amount of concussive force. As the chakra discharges into the air it looks like a large thunderbolt.
-130 JP
Summary: - Spoiler:
Removed several jutsu equaling 85 JP
Added several jutsu equaling 130 JP
45 JP came out of my reservoir
Main Taijutsu: Shinmeiryuu: Mugen no Yaibi [God's Cry Style: Blade of Infinity]
Secondary Taijutsu: Chisokuken
Main Ninjutsu: Kinton (Metal Release)
Secondary Ninjutsu: Suiton (Water Release)
Genjutsu Subtypes: Sight & Feel
Jutsu Points 260/260
Bonus Jutsu Points 90/90
Extra Jutsu Points 265/265
Total Jutsu Points 525/615
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