Zancrow
D-class Nukenin
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Join date : 2010-07-07
Age : 32
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 |  Subject: Kuroihinoryuuou (Black Fire Dragon Kings)  Tue Jan 04, 2011 5:41 am | |
| BACKGROUND: Clan's name: Kuroihinoryuuou (Black Fire Dragon Kings)
Clan's biography: This clan originated from an elite group of shinobi who lived near an active volcano. Often they had to leave the area due to eruptions, but after taking inspiration from the heat and fire of the volcano they developed their own jutsu. They became known as user of the black fire. At first this fire was confused with the Black Fire of Amaterasu, but their flames are far inferior to Amaterasu. They are capable of igniting these flames around themselves in various way or forcing these flames into the environment.
Clan Members: NoneGENETICS: Bloodline's name: Kuroi Hi (Black Fire)
Bloodline's type: Elemental Creation - Advanced Katon
Effects: Shinobi with this kekkei genkai have unique chakra that is highly in tune with their emotions. If the user is depressed or scared they will not be able to call upon their kekkei genkai, but if they are overly passionate or emotional their chakra will exhaust quickly. Their chakra is what is capable of using the Kuroi Hi or Enton jutsu. User must have "Katon" as an element as well as their own clan's jutsu element "Enton." Members of the clan are not required to have "Enton" jutsu, but must have the "Kuroi Hi" jutsu.PRIZED POWERS: Passive traits/abilities:
Kuroihinoryuuou Members are commonly capable of withstanding intense heat without fatiguing. Their body's fair well in cold weather as their natural body temperature is higher than ordinary people. In extreme cold, Kuroihinoryuuou Members are extremely susceptible of hypothermia and thus should avoid extremely cold lands. Members are capable of handling burns better than average people, but their bodies take roughly the same damage.
Clan Ryū: None
Jutsu:
Kuroi Hi
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Kuroi Hi Funka
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub Type: Kuroi Hi
Rank: C
The user covers their arms or legs in black fire. The intensity of these flames are controlled by the user's emotions. The fire will stick to any target the user strikes or strikes the user. The fire will burn for a few seconds before extinguishing when away from the source. This fire burns much hotter than a Katon element jutsu of the same rank. This jutsu requries 2 chakra to maintain per post, the user can make the flames larger for 1 extra chakra per post. The user cannot use any other Enton jutsu while using this jutsu.
Kuroi Hi Bakuhatsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub Type: Kuroi Hi
Rank: B
The user erupts with black flames that cover their body. These flames defend the user from Katon element jutsu C-rank or lower. These flames will stick to any target the user strikes or strikes the user. The fire will burn for a few seconds before extinguishing when away from the source. This fire burns much hotter than a Katon element jutsu of the same rank. This jutsu requires 3 chakra to maintain per post, the user can make the flames larger for 2 extra chakra per post. The user cannot use any other Enton jutsu while using this jutsu.
Jaou Kasatsu Ren Goku Shou
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub Type: Kuroi Hi
Rank: A
The ninja will focus an extremely dangerous level of chakra around their fist so strong that the chakra creates a fiery aura enveloping the user's fist, the chakra will then becomes visible and will start to combus as it morphs into a mortal flame (Normal fire). The flame itself has the ability to melt away anything or anyone as it burns that comes in contact with it, however inferior to Enton. If the enemy would get hit by this jutsu that part of the body's flesh would instantly burn leaving a nasty wound. This jutsu requires the user to feel very strong or passionately about something. This jutsu cost is 16 always.
Enton
- Spoiler:
Enton no Kasui
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Enton
Rank: D
The user will create a small aura like fire ball composed of Enton in both of their palms having all the characteristics of the Enton element. These small aura like fire balls are meant to be thrown at the opponent.
Enton Mune - O- Kiri no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Enton
Rank: C
The user will create a thin, small barrier of black flames surrounding themselves. The user then will release five medium sized black fireballs designated to hit their target, removing the barrier.
Enton Kaen Enjin
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Enton
Rank: C
This jutsu will create a ring of black flames to surround and trap an opponent. The enton flames will rise from the ground and encircle the target, with only a four meter radius to limit their movements. This jutsu can be useful to trap an opponent or to escape. Costs 1 chakra per post.
Enton Karasu no Zetsumei
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Enton
Rank: B
The user will create a pit of blaze from underneath the target. The blaze will then quickly raise above the surface forming into a large burning crow swallowing the target whole. As the user can not control the crow once it surfaces, the target only has to avoid the crow before it surfaces.
Enton Tatsumaki no Nami
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Enton
Rank: B
The user will create a harsh tornado of blaze surrounding themselves and to pull in whatever nearby object into the tornado, consuming it into ash. To maintain cost 1 chakra per post.
Enton Kyuuryuu Toukai no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Enton
Rank: A
This jutsu can only be used if there's nearby existing black flames. The user will create a dragon approximately the size of a pillar from the flames. The user has the ability to manipulate the movements of the dragons until they are destroyed or come in contact with an object. Costs 1 chakra per post. The user can summon more dragons to a total of five for 4 chakra per dragon.
Enton Taikai Nami no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Enton
Rank: A
By touching the ground the user will create a wave of Enton flames that will head toward their target. Once the blaze makes contact with mostly anything it will instantaneously be consumed by the blaze and quickly incinerated. Mandatory 17 chakra
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Meihana
B-class Nukenin
Posts : 28
Join date : 2010-12-29
| | Subject: Re: Kuroihinoryuuou (Black Fire Dragon Kings) Tue Jan 04, 2011 2:34 pm | |
| Just a couple of things I have an issue with.... - Quote :
Jaou Kasatsu Ren Goku Shou
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub Type: Kuroi Hi
Rank: A
The ninja will focus an extremely dangerous level of chakra around their fist so strong that the chakra creates a fiery aura enveloping the user's fist, the chakra will then becomes visible and will start to combus as it morphs into a mortal flame (Normal fire). The flame itself has the ability to melt away anything or anyone as it burns that comes in contact with it, however inferior to Enton. If the enemy would get hit by this jutsu that part of the body's flesh would instantly burn and will be melted away making this jutsu a real danger. This jutsu requires the user to feel very strong or passionately about something. This jutsu cost is 16 always.
Melting people sounds a tad too strong. I'm sure you can figure a way to fix it.... - Quote :
Enton Kyuuryuu Toukai no Jutsu
Type: Ninjutsu
Sub-Type: Enton
Rank: A
This jutsu can only be used if there's nearby existing black flames. The user will create nine dragons approximately the size of a average man from the flames. The user has the ability to manipulate the movements of the dragons until they are destroyed or come in contact with an object. Costs 1 chakra per post.
Is this one Chakra per dragon? Or one chakra as a whole? Besides that I think you've done a decent job of balancing it out... | |
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Zancrow
D-class Nukenin
Posts : 55
Join date : 2010-07-07
Age : 32
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| | Subject: Re: Kuroihinoryuuou (Black Fire Dragon Kings) Wed Jan 05, 2011 1:03 am | |
| Removed the melting perk
Added chakra costs per dragon | |
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Meihana
B-class Nukenin
Posts : 28
Join date : 2010-12-29
| | Subject: Re: Kuroihinoryuuou (Black Fire Dragon Kings) Wed Jan 05, 2011 1:07 am | |
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